proper formatting fiction novel

The story is good. However, it needs proper formatting. And it needs a lot of editing. But other than that, it has a good story with potential definitely.

It honestly looks like a manuscript for a show/movie and there are some formatting error, especially with the punctuation marks, but it seems like it's getting better. However, getting past of all that, it really is a story with a lot of potential. It just needs proper formatting, in terms of the punctuation marks, and a proper pacing when introducing characters because I was immediately thrusted into the world without any prior knowledge of who the characters are as persons.

I genuinely enjoyed reading this novel. The main character (MC) is a standout—witty, fun, and full of personality. His sense of humor, even in serious situations, is reminiscent of Spider-Man, which adds a refreshing and entertaining tone throughout the story. However, around Chapter 20, I noticed a dip in the writing quality—not in grammar, but in structure and formatting. The dialogue becomes confusing, and the absence of proper quotation marks (“”) significantly disrupts the reading experience. For readers who are used to more polished formatting, this can be distracting. Despite that, the overall experience was still enjoyable, and I’d definitely recommend giving this novel a try—especially if you appreciate a humorous MC and can look past the occasional formatting issues.

Hello, I’m the author of this web novel. Since this is my first project, my writing might lack proper formatting or thorough proofreading, which could cause some inconvenience while reading. Feel free to share any advice you have. Thank you for stopping by [img=recommend]

Proper formatting would make this way better with the least effort. I like the plot though. The character depth can be given more importance I feel, but since it is just the beginning, it's acceptable. Good work on the consistency of releases.:)