After wearing the book, the little pixiu exploded in the entertainment circle
The new book," On the Wedding Night, I Kissed the Sick and Disabled Prince to Wake Up "
Lin Suisui was the Medicine King's Valley's direct disciple, a miracle doctor. She had saved countless people in her life, but in the end, an arrow pierced her chest and she did not have a good end.
When she opened her eyes again, she was the Crown Princess who had just married into the Eastern Palace!
In front of him was the eunuch lackey who had threatened to hit him when he was down, and behind him was the seriously injured and unconscious Crown Prince's husband.
Lin Suisui turned around and kissed her husband's thin lips with tears in her eyes…
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Song Mengmeng, the little Pi Xiu who was sleeping and fishing in the Immortal Realm's cave abode, had inexplicably dressed up as the pitiful cannon fodder who had the same name as her in the book.
In order to recover the power of the divine beast and kill everyone in this world again,
As the mythical beast Pi Xiu who was responsible for wealth, anything that could be solved with money was not a problem!
However, there were times when the capital doubling machine would fail. Looking at the villain boss in front of him who was covered in purple qi and bursting with wealth,
Song Mengmeng turned her head and quietly wiped the unknown liquid from the corner of her mouth. She stretched out her white and soft little paws shakily.
She gently tugged at the corner of the big boss's clothes under the table and begged pitifully,
Do you need someone to guard the door? The kind that could guard the house, earn money, and also exorcise evil spirits to ensure safety! As long as he was full.
Looking at the soft little girl in front of him, the big boss nodded his head in a soft-hearted manner.
Not long after…
The soft little girl leaned into the big boss's arms and cried out her hunger.
The big boss gently touched the little Pixiu's fair skin. A tender belly,
Looking at the empty gold, silver, and jewelry in the safe, he fell into deep thought...
Here are my thoughts and I am really sorry for the critic that I am going to bring. First, of all, I do like this fanfiction take place or based on Resident Evil 5, the time Chris Redfield lost Jill due to the battle with Wesker. The plot and setting up is fine, I guess. However here are the cons in this novel: -They are a lot of first sentences in the dialogues, didn't use capital letters which that I found based on what I read. -The writing of describing is...okay, but I think you need to give more detail of the description, the horrifying atmosphere inside this creepy place, and give more vivid imagery. Because of that point above, your novel can be one of the best Resident Evil fanfics since. Most fanfiction is usually focused on shipping, but this one is focused on either a new event or a new spin of Resident Evil 5. I know Resident Evil 5 is not really strong when comes to the story. So, I hope this fan fiction can be better than the original Resident Evil 5 story. That's all I have to say about this fan fiction and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!