"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
well at least don't get mc ntr. i mean if he's taking girls then they should be his fully and not get back to the previous one again.since it's already got meny chapters don't drop it author. try to show more bonding with the girls in a way they only belong to him and loyal without mind control charm thing.