It's the middle of the war and so far, Hermione, Harry, and Ron have been in it together. That is, until Hermione is given a secret task by the deceased Dumbledore. Will she be able to complete it? Will she even truly know what it is that she is supposed to do? Excerpt: Tom propped himself up onto his elbows, slowly so as to not startle the witch. It wasn't out of consideration, he just didn't want to startle her in case she drew her wand. He realized he was making excuses in his head as to why he lingered in her touch. If Tom was to succeed in the future that he had planned out, he would have to figure out what was wrong with him. "You're awake," said Hermione with a small, friendly smile, one he had not seen from her before. Tom narrowed his eyes. He noticed that it was becoming difficult to glare with each passing day. "You were running your fingers through my hair," accused Tom. She frowned. "I did?" asked Hermione puzzled.
Alright the two things I have a problem is story development and character design. MC really showed and shared his power with his "sister" smh. Mostly because if Hermione from the future that's already a big cheat. (She was the greatest witch of their generation) But he decides to help her? What if she turns against him one day? Remember this Hermione is from the future where she died. And she used to live as a only child and probably doesn't see MC as a "brother" so she would most likely kill him. Also MC is too trusting. Ik for a fact if someone like Hermione went through a war and died her "morals" would have dimmed down by a lot. So yeah if mc didn't help Hermione and stop acting so naive I would give this a story a 5/5.