bloxburg big houses with 10rooms 6 story

Your writing was not perfect but still understandable so it's not a big deal. U also updated regularly and I liked the idea of your world. The character design seemed well thought but the story development and your pacing still have rooms to improve. Overall, well done and good luck :)

Notes Before Reading the Novel: First, I would like to tell you, dear readers, that this story will have two main characters. They are Mohin and another named Faiz, who will appear around Chapter 20. The story's events take place in an ancient era where no technology exists. The "modern houses" mentioned in the story refer to well-built, fine-looking brick houses, and are not like the modern houses of our present time.

I like the concise and clean manner of writing and the interesting characters being slowly introduced. I also really like how the houses are developed in the story, it reminds me of the Elder Scrolls Morrowind houses fighting for influence.

You’re the reason chairs exist in hotel rooms

Gotta love the mushrooms, and the rooms made out of mush. 10/10