akuma oc fanfic

Look, I know this is a translation, but the idea, though overused, is good and hasn't been done in this exact case. How feasible would it be for you to write a fanfic with Ryu or Akuma being reborn in a world that's a mix of different martial arts anime? Not just inserting an OC into a character, but actually Ryu or Akuma being reborn after the end of their lives, but instead of simply dying, one of them is reborn in, say, "Baki" and "kengan" On top of that crossover, we place "Hajime no Ippo" to embarrass the protagonists of that serie (Hajime no ippo) a little. Think about it: Ryu facing Jujiro, or maybe a Akuma facing him.

I'll start by talking about what I thought of this fanfic so far. The beginning of the story was good, the protagonist presented himself as an intelligent person and with a strategic mind, but little by little he changed and became more stupid and noisy, like the typical MC shonen. Another thing I didn't like about this fanfic is the fact that the author gave the protagonist an Akuma no Mi of the Mythic Zoan type where in theory he should transform the user into an Asura, but the only thing she does is to grow more arms, none special ability or physical transformation that we all know that an Akuma no Mi of the Zoan Mythic type has, because in all Akuma no Mi of the Zoan type a type of physical transformation in the user, be it a hybrid or total form, in addition, all Akuma no Mi of the Mythic Zoan type have a special ability, for example, the admiral of the Sengoku fleet in his Buddha form has the ability to generate shock waves with his palms and Marco of the Whitebeard pirates has flames that are capable of healing the user, Akuma no Mi appears to be of Paramecia type instead of Zoan type, the author suggested that a big change will occur when awakening happens, but to use Akuma no Mi’s hybrid or full transformation skills isn’t n It is necessary to be in the state of Upon awakening, by the way, this Akuma no Mi chosen for the protagonist is very impractical, because the greater the number of arms the slower the MC is, there is also the fact that the arms that come out from the back have a range smaller than the main arms, since the created limbs do not extend, unless opponents attack from behind for the rest of the things there are few advantages, it would have been better not to have given MC an Akuma no Mi if it were so, nor has the excuse of running out of time, since the protagonist has eaten Akuma no Mi for years, in all these years has he never seen another skill besides growing more hands? I don't think it's possible. Anyway this fanfic is not to my liking, but I will give 4 stars to motivate the author, because it is not easy to write a story. Sorry for any grammatical errors, I am writing this through the Google translator.

Loving the developing storyline! The OC feels natural and gives the fanfic a unique twist. OC 👏🏽 takes 👏🏽 no 👏🏽 BS!

akuma's darkness i personally enjoying 😉

One of the best fanfic you can find about DMC. the OC is....well a good OC! LOL... Well truthfully have nothing to say. A good plot and deroulment. The OC is smart and not dense. Really the OC does wonders and I like it.