jaune and cinder married fanfiction

Another day Another review. Hey Bro could you think about rewriting your Jaune SI story? Or Maybe Continuing it. It's still the hands down best Jaune Fic I've ever read. And Believe me when I say this This site has a LOT of Jaune Si

My story revolves around Cinder navigating his new life and soon new world. The first volume is mainly about when and how Cinder came to be what he is; vol 2 will be when the real fun begins. I will answer any questions you want about my novel in due time.

I enjoy the quality of the writing itself, but honestly this MC-Jaune is just cringey to read honestly, and arguably has a far worse foot-in-mouth syndrome that canon Jaune does, which says a lot, among other things

This is pretty interesting to me, I can't wait to see when Jaune returns to rwby what will his family think of him then?This is pretty interesting to me, I can't wait to see when Jaune returns to rwby what will his family think of him then?This is pretty interesting to me, I can't wait to see when Jaune returns to rwby what will his family think of him then?

this is a pretty nice story so far. i like the Background and worldbuilding you did so far with Cinder and all the characters feel pretty good. Cinder portrayal matches up with the canon character really well, how she wants to hurt Yang in arguments etc and her general demeanor. that part fits well with an immature Cinder that didnt fully convert to the dark side yet. Now we need the healing part where the rough edges of her darker parts get sanded down, but we get to that :D there is enough room for potential character development that makes it fun to read this story.