Longevity begins with a servant
Li Mo had transmigrated to another world and finally found this place…
The Daoists occupied the Immortal Abode, and the Saints and Buddhas built the Indestructible Heaven.
Demons ran rampant in the country, and it was not a rumor that ghosts destroyed the world.
The true body of the Martial Immortal suppressed the hundred regions, and the sea demons surged into the sky.
Plant monsters ran on the ground, who was a great medicine?
True immortals were ethereal, and all living beings were fighting to cross over.
Li Mo cultivated step by step and finally became an immortal, forever staying in the world.
(This book will not ascend to the immortal cultivation world, nor will it follow the traditional practice of Qi, Foundation Establishment, and Jindan.
After putting on the shelf, I gradually entered a good state. Please enjoy it.
New book, please collect, please recommend, please support.)
I'm not a piece of wood
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Honestly this book is really good, has amazing potential and just hits the spot on some of my desires when imagining this genre. I hope that at some point you will go back and edit your work in the early chapters because before chapter 300 it takes an incredible amount of effort to push through the pain of the grammar and flow of the story to get that far. Otherwise, an amazing story and with a few touch ups could have a huge fanbase unfortunately those early chapters completely stonewall general readers. Good Luck with your work in the future.