plot graphic organizer 3rd grade story
Hei Anjing is an extreme type of person. Mischievous and loves to play around with annoying people. A Devil may care attitude when in his good mood but horribly terrifying when angered. A cold hearted person with an unparalleled intelligence, who treated others as entertainment. A Nethergod who was supposed to be a Lord that governed the Netherworld as a ruler. Cruelty and Mercilessness are his nature. But despite that his heart only beats for one person. His love, feelings and obsession are for his alone. One whose memories were sealed for some reason. While the other lost his right as a lord and his soul fragments were scattered all over different worlds. Then they've met in those worlds. Bullying the heaven's beloved children and destroying the plots of the worlds creating endless chaos. With both the MC and ML having some problems in the brain and are psychopaths. Will the world end or not? "I will chase and capture you, over and over again. Imprisoning you in my embrace. Until there will be no gaps for you to escape anymore. You are my obsession and my everything." "Capture me. Find me. As long as you do, I will stay by your side until the end. There is no need for you to know what I did for you." A hellish ride of two shameless and evil people. The true meaning of their relationship was hidden within those sealed memories. An action packed journey with thrilling and full of suspense events which you wouldn't like to miss! NO ONE 17 AND UNDER. You have been warned. Credits for the Char. photo: Natalie Riverson (Pinterest)
it's quite an interesting read. progress isn't too slow nor too fast, plot and character development progresses as the story unfolds too. but the world building still needs some work. some things are just glossed over, not explained at all. 30 chapters in and the cultivation level system of the world is not known. the grades of things ( pills, talismans, etc) are just mentioned without any explanation on whether they pertain to qi refining stage or foundation establishment stage. the author just casually mentions for example; a 3rd grade pill and expects the readers to just fill in the blanks. ( like wtf is a 3rd grade pill? is it a golden core lvl pill?) does 1st grade refer to qi refining and 2nd grade foundation establishment? theres no clue. maybe you plan to do it slowly later but dude the first 30 chapters is enough to reveal all this. this leaves more to be desired. I'm not asking for an info dump but still at least define your world clearly.