hurt negan fanfiction

As Negan is running through the woods back home. He comes up on the cottage again. He runs right in the front door walks through the front room past the couch where the black hair girl was left asleep and into Sam and colleens room. Negan goes into the room and opens up a chest he pulls out a old rusty sword and a rigid bow that looks like it would snap if ever used. He sets them both up against the bed reaches in the chest again and pulls out some winter clothes a couple jackets and some thick pants. Ah here we go he says as Negan notices a bag underneath the pants and pulls it out. It's a brown bag with a strap on it Negan turns it over grabs the flap on top flips it open. Papers, items it's just a bunch of random stuff Negan thought.  He looks over the bag again and notices some stitching on the underside he turns the bag over and reads Salazar, Negan sits in confusion for a moment and thinks Is this mine he opens the bag

as someone who finished army,have brother in marines and love the walking dead this story got my attention right away 5 chapter in and i cnt wait for more !

I like most of Negan’s novels, but I could’ve done without the nasty Prince…. 😔

I hate to say this, but Lord Negan is guilty of a grave crime. He will be sanctioned for creating an amazing novel and not having more chapters out for it!!!

Okay, the idea behind this is amazing. But you shouldn't just correct the translation, you should also rewrite some things. Especially the connections to God Valley, because they really hurt the fanfiction in general.