Douluo: They Go Wild with Cheats After Reading My Diary
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Su Chen transmigrated to the Douluo Continent and activated a golden finger that made him stronger just by writing a diary. Right from the start, he received a critical reward: Threefold Returning Vital Qi + a Hundred Years of Cultivation + Martial Soul Evolution.
On this very day... Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong… all discovered a unique [Diary Instance]. Within it, they saw their own fates—and even more absurdly, they received generous rewards from it!
As the diary continued to update day by day, the three love-brained ladies of the Spirit Hall awakened and began madly farming rewards, torturing Tang San, and putting Yu Xiaogang in his place.
The gears of fate began to turn. Everyone started enjoying their cheat-code lives—except Tang San and his crew, who were mentally broken.
Spirit Master Tournament. Tang San looked at the contestants on the stage. Every single one of them was a Titled Douluo, all sporting 100,000-year spirit rings, and his father Tang Hao was being beaten like a dog.
Tang San: "Back when I was fifteen, I stood on the tournament stage like a small fry. I swore through tears that one day, everyone would see me!" Later, after painstakingly becoming a god and finally obtaining 100,000-year spirit rings himself, he found out that those Titled Douluo from before had already become gods, and all upgraded their setups to a full set of million-year spirit rings.
Tang San: "Thirty years east of the river, thirty years west of the river… My cheat just isn’t as OP as theirs. Let the dead rest in peace!"
Yu Xiaogang: "Su Chen is a good man. In order to help me and Er Long's great love, he successfully had me castrated. But... Er Long... please come back!"
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I don't want others to be like me thinking this is might actually be a decent read. It's not. It's pretty f*cking garbage. If you're looking for a decent Kim possible fanfic go read something else this isn't it. Don't be fooled by the good reviews as they most give it a five because of an idea of Kim possible harem fic. Even I should not have trusted this horny people. Review: Writing quality- it's pretty decent for a fanfic. Few grammar errors here and there and most of the time the dialogue is quite cringe but still decent nonetheless, for a fanfic. Can be easily fix with few edits and better dialogue. Story development- its pretty sh*t. The pacing is quite weird as it jump from one place to another without rhyme or reason. It can be quite confusing at times. And the author is doing the most no no thing as an author, telling not showing. Most of the adventures are just briefly mentioned even though it's one of the thing that made Kim possible great. Remember SHOW DON'T TELL. Characters is thrown in or out without explanation or story behind them. That's boring and an example of what an author shouldn't do. Character design- it's quite insulting honestly. Most characters are the p*rn version of themselves so they are horny sl*ts. You'd think that's a good thing but the smut is lackluster and can't really save this fic. If you like the original Kim possible characters then you'll probably be insulted by how they're portrayed here. Updating stability- doesn't update everyday but still alright. World Background- I'm pretty sure the author is jacking off to Kim possible p*rno when he thought of this fanfic. This is not a Kim possible fanfic, this is a Kim possible P*RNO fanfic. You'd think that's quite hot but the smut is so boring I couldn't get a hard on. If you're looking for a smut Kim possible I suggest you look for something else cause you'll just be disappointed. Every character is a sl*t one way or another and the author doesn't really build the world so in this aspect is pretty garbage too. I wouldn't be surprised if the author decided to cuck Ron, oh wait he did already. *SPOILER* Bonnie and Tara is in a relationship before they have a relationship with Ron and they still are even now that they're in a relationship with Ron(even though Bonnie love Ron since they were child and Ron love her, basically Tara got first) . This is not a harem this is an open relationship. I repeat, THAT IS NOT A HAREM THAT IS AN OPEN RELATIONSHIP. Too many people mistake that sh*t. Tlrd: if you're looking for a decent Kim possible fanfic this isn't it. But if you want garbage pacing, characterization, and plot with a dose of a poorly written smut then this book is for you. It's a shame really, the first few chapters are actually decent and has thought put into it but then it became more and more mess up and started sh*tting on the original beloved cartoon. Let's hope the author don't delete this review so that the others will know what they are signing up for.