Obsessed with My Puppy Boy
At the age of ten, he shyly called out "Sister Jiang," a slender, small boy obedient like a little milk dog. She imitated the adults, kissing his forehead to comfort him.
When they met again, he was dressed in a sharp suit with gold-rimmed glasses, his every move as noble and pure as glimmering frost and snow, unapproachably lofty.
Tearing off that scholar's disguise, he finally revealed his fangs in the darkness.
"Isn't this what you taught me?" he whispered, encircling her slim waist from behind and seeking a kiss, his voice seductive, nearly playful as he called out those two words, "Sister Jiang."
Jiang Jiu only then realized that the other party had long since become an obsessive and scheming mad dog, in a place she knew not of.
Deer Hearing the Flute · Urban
This could be a really good story but it is being held back majorly with word count inflation, repetition, rewording of the same information given before, and this happens for many chapters on end. In fact you have to read a lot of chapters to get to anything that moves the story forward and is not simply word count inflation. I finished the free chapters and don’t think it’s worth paying for the locked chapters because of the issues. If these issues didn’t exist, this would be an interesting read because the MC is mature, the world building has hints of interesting mechanics, and there is more realism than you see in these types of stories. Very disappointing that a good story is being handicapped by fluff and wordcount inflation.