barba cain you call that being dominant svu fanfic

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This fanfic all together isn’t bad. The writing quality is good and there are little to no grammatical mistakes, It updates very frequently like 1 chapter a day, and the world of Hazbin hotel just has so much potential to explode and expand. But where this fanfic falls of is in its story, the bits with Adam are very fun to read as we get to explore more of Heaven but the parts with Cain fall of flat. Cain is just not as interesting, he’s bland not because he has no character but because he has too much going on he is just really boring to read. This story should have focused on Adam and Cain equally. All in all it’s not a bad fanfic but it could definitely be better.

I will be frank, have you ever want to have someone like Commissar Cain being reincarnated to a fantasy world, then this book is for you! Author has a sense of humour and writing skills to make the interactions feel natural (rare on webnovels) 11/10

This peice contains far too many senseless racist contents, false advertisment through demeaning claims. As for proof, I think only mindless ones would not know about this but here goes 1. You cant call someone Chinese if China doesnt exist. 2. If the '"Chinese" are dominant in the east of Wai peninsula then people would call them Easterners or something like "People from the East". 3. The World is already doomed if the Chinese are best