earthbound novel

So, where to start? The beginning of the story was top-notch; I'm not even talking about the smut. The story was different from what I'm used to reading, and I liked that. The part where the story starts going off the rails is when Tasha and his mom get involved. As you may already know, harem genre readers are used to a certain way of family reactions/involvements, ie: wincest, so if you're not going to follow that formula, then you are going to have to set up that strict mother-son relationship ahead of her involvement. i don't mind not following the formula its just the way she was introduced meaning the description of said character was too specific for her not to be a love interest leading readers to believe you were going to follow the 'script', so when you jump straight into her being a fuck toy for someone else it kinda leads the readers to 'cucked' in a way that may not sit well with most readers of the harem genre unless noted in the tag 'NTR'. On the subject of NTR, you almost lost me with that whole situation involving Natasha or Elara, I don't remember which one, getting intimate with someone else after professing her love and possessiveness for the MC and then rejoining the harem without a word from the MC, whether he is okay with it or not. Things like that, and then the way the story just snowballs after his earthbound family joins the crew like they were an afterthought, and Tasha was just unnecessary throughout the whole story, because you could've just replaced her with his mom for all the character development parts of the story, and it would've fit better.

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