vegeta loves goten fanfiction

The idea of sending Goten to the past is simply amazing so far it's all well and good. There were some moments when I thought that the character of Goten was acting very spoiled and naive. like I know King vegeta may not be the best person but his conversation with led me to think that only because he had power, he was acting very cocky... but that also shows that is his true character :) Anyway Goten now has a chance to come out from the shadow of his father and brother. literally Goten has gotten no spotlight so far in the series... at least that what I was think. Now Goten can show his true potential and his REAL character to us through the author. You are doing a great job although Goten getting and been attracted to girls so easily is not really my cup of tea. Well best of luck for me :)

Honestly this dragon Ball of fanfiction is really good I am totally enjoying it. I especially love the goten theme because honestly in the original show he didn't have any highlight moment, even with his insane potential. You deserve a five star writer, Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming. And I have a small suggestion can you give goten super Saiyan rose in future.

bro your story would be good, but you killed goten personality, if you want to put harem you wouldn't need to make goten pervert and shout about harem, you just make any girl in naruto fall on him without even trying. Goten originally pure hearted kid but you make it like a chinese transmigrator protagonist.