"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
What I like: All of it except one thing. What I don't like: The reason he can't cast the patronus charm is because he learnt dark magic. WTH?! SNAPE can use the patrons charm and he has definitely used dark magic, so why can't Frederick cast the patronus charm? It is, honestly, a bad (almost stupid) reason for why he can't cast it. If that is fixed then everything would be just about excellent. Note: I am making this even though I have only reached chaper 8.