goonies novel

Good novel overall, but always the same pattern. MC plays tough, villain and goonies mocks him + MC's friends try to dissuade him, and then MC slaps them. And the maths :o numbers keep changing from a chapter to another.

It is a very good novel. The MC is headstrong , do not hide behind others and does not shy away from exposing his strength . It has good writing quality . My suggestions. 1) World background could have been more properly fleshed out. 2) You could have added a bit more flair to the story - A little bit of romance for the MC could have been good in my opinion. ( what is even the purpose of bringing SHINA into every other random chapters if you are not even gonna introduce her or other romantic interests for the MC) 3) MC revenge felt shallow. He should have tortured them more. 4) Allen and his goonies are often neglected while MARK and RISA are given undue importance. At this point, the MC should have realised that there is no point in depending on the other characters and will have to do everything himself. Overall a very solid read. Kudos to the author

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