inutachi meets rin fanfiction

I absolutely love this! I cant wait till rin meets him it is gonna be amazing. This is a really well thought out story and cant wait to see where it takes me.

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i dont give you the perfect score but is also good and ave a good potential :) normaly i dont give you 5 star for character design because is a fanfiction but you take the caracther and add something like kurenei and rin.

This translation was alright, but man, why do you have to keep repeating the full name of someone that is already introduced once? Rin Nohara this, Rin Nohara that. Just call her Rin. I thought you already 'fixed' a lot of things, but in reality, not really. It's so jarring to read and have Rin's full name in almost every paragraph. You call Obito, Obito. Kakashi, Kakashi. But Rin has to be Rin Nohara consistently?

This is a good fanfiction. It has a story of its own and don't follow the storyline. I stop reading ATG because Yun Che keeps fucking every girl he meets. Keep up the good work.