[Heaven-defying Comprehension: I'm fooling the Heavenly Laws in the chat group.]
Mo Lang had been reborn on the Blue Star, and ten years before the arrival of the foreign land, he had received a gift from the main star and obtained heaven-defying comprehension.
He had also joined the group of protagonists in the heavens, only to discover that they were all young big shots. In order to fool him, he, who had top-notch comprehension, decided to pretend to be a big shot…
The young Huangtian Emperor said," Boss, you're awesome. I just had an idea. You directly perfected the ❮ Self-Transformation Technique ❯ for me?"
The young Heavenly Emperor Ye thought, I just got the 'all' riddle, and you've deduced all nine secrets? Big Boss, teach me!
The young Xiao Yan: A powerful Dou Technique could be formed from the fusion of Heavenly Flames?
Li Qiye: Can you deduce who stole my sheep?
Young Tang San: Big brother, I beg you, help me deduce!
Mo Lang,[Fantasy Sewers, stand aside!]
Just like that, when the Outlander Realm descended, everyone panicked.
Mo Lang stood up and said,"It's alright, I'll help."
The foreign boss thought, F * ck…Run! The Ancestral Star is too terrifying!
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Everything was just fine and all until the author decided to have Mc get beaten up by Wolverine while possessing Ch-24 and not to mention NZT which is supposed to give Mc a huge advantage against Wolverine. The fight scene with Wolverine is too generic and anime-like, how can Wolverine disappear in his vision and suddenly appear in front of him like some generic anime fight scene. In the movies and even the comics, Wolverine is NOT that fast to suddenly disappear and appear. And here I thought I finally found a good Marvel fanfic. I know mistakes are inevitable and no one is perfect but from what I just read, this is clearly not a mistake and the author wrote the fight scene with purpose probably just to give the Mc character development. Anyways, this is my honest review, I wish you luck with your fanfic author-san.