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The law of Fiction: Harem in the fiction world
Author: daygonyuuki
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When Yohan woke up in the morning, he had a beauty in his lap and in his bedroom. It was like a dream come true for him until reality struck him. It was then he remembered that he had been cursed by a goddess in the game he had been playing before sleeping. In his sleep-deprived state, he had offended the goddess and as a result, he had been cursed to become a 'no-good' man who could only provide 'support' to the 'heroines' of this world. Thinking nothing of that curse beforehand, Yohan went to sleep, only to find his world changing from that day onwards. His normal and mundane life was no longer going to be as such as more and more fantasy creatures began to show up. And a female voice awoke him with a notification *Ding dong ding. Congrats on unlocking the fiction system. From here on, the user will experience the full scope of the logic of the fiction world. May the user use his PP and conquer everyone.* And it was then Yohan realized - he was no longer in a world governed by science but one that followed the laws of magic. And the only way to survive was to utilize these so-called 'laws of fiction' to his advantage. And the best and worst part of it all? The more he let his desire go, the stronger he became. — — — 500 PS/150 GT = 1 extra chapter Gifts above 1000 = 1 extra chapter instantly Show support for a faster release rate. . — — — Additional Tags: Evil Mc(Will develop) - Intelligent Mc - Shameless Mc - Scheming Mc(Later on) - Smut - No NTR - But Contains Netori - Legal Loli - Succubus - Elf - Angel - Vampire - Cat Girls - Dragon Girls - Fox Girls - Monster Girls - Slaves - Milf - Princess - Beautiful - YANDERE - Seinen - Mature - R18 - 18 - Sex Stories - Beastality - Hentai - NSFW - Pregnancy - Incest - Domination Play - Controlling Emotions - Corrupting Righteous Characters - Gore - Transmigration - Mana - Devil - Demon - Necromancer - Death - Dungeon - Evolution - Threesome - Hints of Yuri — ー ー Warning: Read at your own risk.

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A Negative Looking To Be A Positive: A Short Story Compilation- 2

Volume 2 of my short story collection with another 50 stories. Warning: dark, twisted, disturbing, violent, gory and perverse material contained herein.

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Mr. Positive Vol. 0- Before The Beginning

John M. Python is a frail 16-year-old geek, who is not afraid to break from his shell of personality and fight back. That's the reason why he always gets beat up by bullies and his arrogant, strong twin brother, Alex, always steps in to help him out. However, at one point in their school life, John started bragging about being stronger than his brother which made Alex furious. This turning point in Alex's behavior not only makes John's new way of thinking evolve and try to be stronger than him, but also stand up and rebel against his oppressors. John says he doesn't need his brother's help which also adds up to their dispute. But when Alex accidentally helps his brother after seeing him get beaten up in a school field trip, the delinquents start planning something big and really dangerous to him.

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FEEDBACK: The College System

What if success whispered in your ear, solved your problems... and rewrote reality behind your back? Rachel never asked to be chosen. One morning she woke up with gaps in her memory, a strange interface whispering through her thoughts, and classmates acting like yesterday never happened. But when the system began guiding her—subtly at first—life got easier. Her answers were faster. Her instincts sharper. People listened. And others began to fall into line. Grades soared. Doors opened. Friends changed. But so did reality. Her roommate vanishes. Faculty begin to disappear—or forget. A debate turns into a performance. And through it all, Rachel alone remembers the pieces that shouldn’t fit. The system promises progress. Perfection. Control. But beneath it's code is something hungry. Something watching . And Rachel may be the last one who can see it coming. Now Rachel must decide: stay compliant and powerful, or rebel and be erased. Power is seductive. But compliance has a price—and the invoice always arrives.

Caren_Cc · Sci-fi

Mr. Positive Abridged Version

John M. Python is a frail 16-year-old geek, who is not afraid to break from his shell of personality and fight back. That's the reason why he always gets beat up by bullies and his arrogant, strong twin brother, Alex, always steps in to help him out. However, at one point in their school life, John started bragging about being stronger than his brother which made Alex furious. This turning point in Alex's behavior not only makes John's new way of thinking evolve and try to be stronger than him, but also stand up and rebel against his oppressors. John says he doesn't need his brother's help which also adds up to their dispute. But when Alex accidentally helps his brother after seeing him get beaten up in a school field trip, the delinquents start planning something big and really dangerous to him.

Rainbow_Zap · Fantasy

My Positive Lover

Cruiszier Louie Gonzales De Castro , known as the Cruisin' Casanova and one of the most sought out bachelor in his generation, woke-up one day realizing that he played with the wrong hallowed bitch. The woman he thought as merely one of his toys already made a huge hole in his great ship. Every woman who used to chased him are now ensuring their distance. Almost everyone . In his sweet escape, he met the most optimistic person in Italy. She was his first. His first Hope , his first Love and His first Heartbreak. Sophie was the most optimistic person he'd ever met. Her vibrant smile brings life to almost everything around her. But there was something hidden in those bright smiles ,something very dark . --- Alas, He chose to stare straight at the darkness. But will she finally feel him? Witness how Cupid's Schemes help them realize the silent voices within their hearts . Imagine Cupid's arrow for the first time

Salwyn_Mestiola · Urban
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How to give positive feedback for fiction stories?
2 answers
2024-11-09 15:09
One way to give positive feedback for fiction stories is to focus on the characters. For example, you can say 'The characters in this story are so vivid and well - developed. I really felt like I got to know them personally.'
What are the elements to consider when giving positive feedback for fiction stories?
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2024-11-09 13:26
The world - building in fiction stories is important too. So, you could give feedback like 'The world - building in this story is so immersive. I could easily picture the different settings and cultures.' Also, consider the pacing. 'The pacing of the story is perfect. It neither felt too rushed nor too slow, which made it a pleasure to read.'
Has 'planet dolan reads fanfiction' received any positive feedback?
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2024-12-07 12:57
There's a good chance it has. Since fanfiction is a popular form of creative expression among many fandoms, if Planet Dolan reads it in an engaging and respectful way, it could attract positive feedback. It gives a platform to fanfic writers and also provides entertainment for those who like to see different interpretations of their favorite stories. Also, if Planet Dolan offers good commentary while reading, that can add to the appeal and result in positive feedback.
How can feedback improve historical fiction writing?
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2024-11-05 13:18
It can also improve character development. If the feedback says that a character seems out of place in the historical setting, the writer can adjust the character's traits or actions. Moreover, feedback on the plot's pacing and how it relates to the historical events can lead to a better - structured story. If the story drags during important historical moments, the writer can speed it up based on the feedback.
What are the key elements in writing feedback for historical fiction?
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2024-11-05 11:35
The plot's plausibility in relation to the historical setting is important. In feedback, you might say if the events seem likely to have occurred during that era. Also, the use of language. If it's a historical fiction about ancient Rome, the language should not be too modern and should give a sense of the time. For instance, avoiding modern slang. And the overall atmosphere. Does it really feel like the historical period it's supposed to represent? This can be mentioned in the feedback.
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