haruhi suzumiya no yuutsu light novel

it seems like the time loop is similar to haruhi suzumiya , anime xD the time loop, anyway I'll read this later, but i kinda want a haruhi suzumiya fanfic.

Honestly would be a much better story if the names weren’t so butchered only complaint I have is the fact the translation is ass when it comes to the names like renner being called Lana and momonga being called flying squirrel along with fei fei for monon Lowkey wish more effort was put in otherwise good story

Haruhi bneran lenyap gk y,,katanya haruhi cuma bisa mati kalau d bunuh sama suaminya yg siluman ular ,,tp kok bubu bisa bunuh haruhi,,ayo bubu bertahan jangan sampai mati

The story is filled with plot twists. I did not expect Mori to fall in love with Haruhi. But, I feel like you're describing too much. For example, The audience didnt need to know that Haruhi was eating a banana because it held no relevance to the story at all. We also didn't need to know that Haruhi was going to the park because nothing happened there besides her going to sleep and waking up.

Ever since I read Penguin Revolution, I've liked the manager/producer trope in light novels and CNs. The high school drama I could do without, however, since very few writers do it well. In the initial chapter, the MC is immediately plunged into a daily life full of complication, and the subsequent chapters certainly are built well on the foundation of the first. From the first chapter to succeeding chapters, the motivation of the MC to put his best effort into idol managing is also shown, though I look forward to seeing how that motivation matures in the future. He's certainly a go-getter, so it promises to be interesting. While the character of the MC is set up well, I'd like to see a bit more set up in the character of the girls in the chapters following their introductory scenes. The pacing is good, the plot is developing nicely. But, what the heck, if this is discount Haruhi Suzumiya, I will cry. Big fat ugly tears. Author, you are warned~ ;] The grammar is good enough, but needs work. The plot and the MC give the story enough charm that the reader is drawn more and more into the world. This story about the travails of Araragi Hideki, I definitely recommend it. Fight on, Araragi Hideki!