iron man x captain america yaoi fanfic

Am really enjoying the book great storyline. Most times marvel fanfic don't usually write about the period between captain America time and iron man's time Great development

The novel is overall well written. The biggest issue I have with it is that the mc has zero/very little impact on the story. Captain America’s story went exactly as it did in the movie same for iron man 1 at which point I left it

It's abandoned already, but I think it's a good idea to voice why it probably is. This fic doesn't know where it wants to go. It starts in the time of the first iron man movie, then randomly jumps through time to the captain america one in WW2. No tangible connection. It was very promising and will hopefully be rewritten more cohesively in the future.

akon is spoiler in this match.however I didn't read this novel.so I am writing anything in this post.justin Thor iron man captain America black widow hulk scarlet witch quick silver vision war machine doctor strange Loki spider man star lord groot nebula gomera wasp antman ultron raccoon thanos mysterio elemental infinity gauntlets

And I read up to ch200 and this is my review: For me a fafic revolves around 2 things, 1: the involvement of the OC-MC with the original MCs of the work and 2: the OC-MC developing the powers of the universe in which was placed. and now guess what? none of these 2 rules that in my opinion should be followed by all fanfics were fulfilled, the OC-MC was placed in 1945, and until now (ch200) there was no time skip, that's why the involvement of the OC-MC with characters like man of iron, spider man, doctor strange doesn't exist, and that takes away one of the main things of a fanfic for me, of course, it has involvement with captain america, x-man, eternals and some other OC enemies that the author put (in my opinion these OCs that the author put on spoiled the work even more because they messed with the canon of the story), and for me, apart from captain america, the x-man and eternal arcs are horrible, one of the worst marvel arcs, so read this story it was very distressing for me, and in the number 2 that I put up there, it refers to the power of the mc, the only thing that matters for the mc is to get more Superman Cards to gain more strength, if you take that power away from him, he would be nothing, so things like magic, weapons and knowledge were not rams were used in this work, and for a world as big as marvel's, this was very disappointing.