ray bradbury first novel
An amazing world of cultivation. A majestic world where miracles happen. There is a warrior who defies destiny and forge his own path facing innumerable difficulties ahead. Come and join the life of the person who will go against the set destiny of the cruel world and become something extraordinary. ===== Extraordinary my foot. What is this illogical cr*p? Does it even make sense? If you are doctor, then work in a hospital. What the hell are you doing going after girls? If you are a commander in the army, then bring your army to get revenge on those who wronged you. Why go through the trouble of pretending to be a weakling. You are a useless son in law? Your wife's family thinks you are good for nothing? Then how the hell did you score her in the first place?!!! If they like money so much and you are a hidden millionaire, then why in the name of sanity would you hide this fact and be berated every day?!!! The hell is all this?!!! The more I read it, the more illogical it becomes. Like this all came straight out of someone's as-- [Host, why don't you calm down?] 'You shut up!!! You're the reason I'm stuck here in the first place!!!!' [Host, you need anger management] 'THE FU*K DID YOU SAY?!!!!!' ===== Hello everyone! This is my second novel and so far, nothing is decided. This is just an idea that has been plaguing my mind for quite a long time and I decided to let it out and let you guys decide whether or not I should work on it. Give it a proper read and let me know. You guys will decide the fate of this novel. Also, I would like you guys to come up with proper genres for this story. Bonus chapters: 150 PS for one chapter 300 PS for another chapter 20 GT for two chapters 50 GT for another two chapters 1 Review of 4 stars or above, 1 extra chapters Maximum extra chapters per week: 7 ===== The cover is A.I generated and is not mine. If the real owner would like me to remove it, let me know in any chapter comments. That's it. Enjoy! ~~ Character art: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1B7sHito4UOZqPIK5pPyIFTzgqiaT_ZlU?usp=sharing
The first chapter was bribed with its brevity, the second chapter was length. But the author skillfully used the right emotions to show how the character of the novel feels. At first I thought that it was a bowling alley, but it seems here the story is twisted more than fast-catching! In two chapters it’s still difficult to judge the whole novel, but for sure, we can say that it is intriguing! The third chapter was somewhat reminiscent of Ray Bradbury’s story "Uncle Einar". The same beautiful, kind and interesting. Oh, and here is the "Index ..." the same Toaru Majutsu no Index ... amusing, extremely amusing ... when I read Ursula Le Guin, I involuntarily recalled Tolkian's "There and back or the adventures of the Hobbit." Probably many repetitions are in the novels of the 20th and 21st centuries. The third chapter is the most intriguing ... it’s still difficult to talk about the whole novel, but I liked it for its unusual style, such a simple one, and airy like a cloud. With an interest