"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
This chapter is packed with tension and emotion. Remus’s inner conflict and Sirius’s growing self-awareness are written so well, and that almost-confession scene really hits. The Walburga twist raises the stakes perfectly, while James adds just the right balance to the intensity. Really engaging and hard to put down.