"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
First reviewer here - Grammar is fine, you should have no problem reading, I don't think there is any AI use. Now about the story - Right now not much has happened, but the character of Kakashi (now Luke) is pretty fun. My only critique is that it still feels a little too much like Kakashi, I would have liked it better if you put in some of Luke's personality as well. Another thing I have is the constant use of Japanese vocabulary such as Chiron-sensei, shinobi, taijutsu, stuff like that is really immersion breaking the PJO world, plus the fact that no one is asking him how and why he knows these Japanese words is also weird. I'm looking forward to where you go with this, always exciting to see an original PJ fanfiction. Looking forward to seeing how you merge in Thalia and Annabeth.