patsy and delia fanfiction

author, Delia is the only love interest ? Even if he marries her, I hope it won't turn into a harem? Dhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhfhdhdhdhdhhdhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfh

This novel was fine until movie 3, the author promised too much and the only thing he did was to make "fate" prevent Ash from remembering the plot, that he cannot move at crucial moments and marry his mother Delia with a random guy justifying it and even killed the random guy's wife to marry him to Delia, It was pretty disappointing and probably a lot of people dropped out in that arc including me.

I haven’t read that much chapters to really give a good review but just wanted to say you can’t call yourself the legendary pervertedmc in the Pokemon universe if you don’t **** Delia Ketchum.

c'mon man, it's been a good story till now, but can you proofread it? the chapter 16 there is three or four times it was supposed to be twerp or brat but instead it says ash, and idk if it is the 15th chapter that he talks to Delia and serena mother instead of them saying hello this is Delia, or hello this is (whatever serena mother name is), no they say: hello this is ash's mother and hello this is Serena's mother, c'mon just proofread it a bit. aside from this i don't have more to complain as I'm still on chapter 17 or so, but this going to be tiring if it continues this way

the book is going good so far but I hope that the kill Delia soon for what she did to witch friend and I hope that Alex and Abby get to happy and she turned like Alex with long life and have children