snape dirty talk in hermione's mind fanfiction

MC is Snape. Love relationship: Snape x Hermione. Deeply disappointed 😔 Snape's not a jedi or a sith, Snape's a hermione fanboy. Anakin Skywalker and Snape fuse their souls, in such a fusion Anakin's soul was the most predominant. So I expected an intelligent protagonist without a stupid hero complex... just read chapter 15 and draw your own conclusions

Horrible. He's a muggle, sorted into Slytherin, kept talking back to snape, exposing his secret without worrying that Snape will read his mind. Then, his sickening simping for Hermione despite both are in opposite house, he always follows potter like a dog leg. I seriously suspect that his author writing reviews from duplicate accounts

The Mc tries to flirt with Hermione, an 11-year-old child, to make her his wife in the future. I think that's called grooming. Also, Snape is uncharacteristically good and less scummy, and even though the MC is sirous black's son dosn't do anything to him, and is just fine with Sirius being released from prison. which works out because Snape is the MC's favourite character, aka the author's favourite character.

this a script not a novel example scene 1 in the corridor you will talk with hermione and then cut scene 2 you and hermione will be in the library and talk there and cut scene 3 hagrids hut you will with hagrid along with hermione and cut scene 4 already inside the castle you will with hermione about hagrid you are making a facking script not a novel, the flow of the story is nowhere to be found you cut a part of the story and skipped to the next part

So................ We not gonna talk about hermione in that cover photo?