isekai long stories
My favorite work, might revisit it one day, but until then, it's at a permanent stop. Nobody thought the end of the world as they knew it would come like this. In a dystopian future, 95% of the population was sent to another universe, one resembling the game Jack had played, "Elder Heir Online'. He would've normally enjoyed such an opportunity, but the company 'DiveCore', from his real world, came along. As long as any of them breathed, his revenge wouldn't be complete. Using his knowledge of the game, and willingness to go through the worst to exact vengeance, he will slowly become what he avoided when he played the game in the real world: a villain. GUYS. If you ever see grammatical mistakes, typos, words clearly missing etc. FEEL FREE TO CORRECT ME. I will never hold it against you, rather, I'll thank you! Despite all my efforts, mistakes will get through, but with your help, we can make it better, one mistake at a time. If you have comments, complaints or want to discuss something feel free to use my email or join the discord server! https://discord.gg/7N8wrYCjzN [email protected]
Character building is good, the dialogues feel genuine, easy to understand English and no grammar mistakes. All isekai stories have good potential and this is no exception. The chapter length needs to be long though.