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Li Che had transmigrated and, after living nineteen ordinary years, he opted to accept his fate, marrying and having children, striving to support his family. But the moment his daughter was born.... Through his daughter, he rose in status, and his life was no longer ordinary. ... With his daughter’s safe birth, you gained a Dao Fruit, "Immortal Artisan". When his daughter turned one, safe and sound, you gained the Dao Fruit "Dragon Elephant Vajra". At his daughter's age of two, free from illness and disaster, he gained a Dao Fruit, "Pure Heart". By the time his daughter was three, lively and clever, he gained a Dao Fruit, "Chess Saint". His daughter was four, five, six years old.... ... Li Che discovered that with each passing year of his daughter’s age, he could condense a Dao Fruit to enhance himself. From then on, Li Che harbored a simple and unpretentious wish. A Dao Fruit a year, quietly safeguarding longevity. As a father, he only wished... Starting from the warmth of his wife and child by the hearth, to peacefully protect his daughter's immortality. Silently condensing countless Dao Fruits. Henceforth cultivating his spirit, invincible between heaven and earth.

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Billionaire's Long Journey of Chasing His Love

Tong Airui was kicked in the ribs by a little girl! The news spread, and his brothers and sisters were instantly in an uproar. "Who is that girl? Let's avenge Fourth Brother!" Who is the little girl? The purple-clad car goddess on the racetrack, the beautiful girl at the chessboard, and she's been bearing a nickname for more than ten years: sweeping star! Eighteen car accidents, and she was present at every one! Sure enough! Whoever meets her is unlucky! But what puzzled Yi Luowa was: Even the dog next door started avoiding her, yet why does that cunning wolf refuse to leave? When she first felt life was meaningless, it was him who tightly held her hand. "As long as I'm alive, the sky won't fall on you!" From then on, her world was bright! [Maid Chapter] One day, Tong Airui was thirsty, "Yi Luowa, I want to drink water!" "Your mouth is below your nose, drink if you want!" a certain woman pouted, glancing at the man sitting beside her and said, "Old Eighth, I'm thirsty." Old Eighth hurriedly brought water to her hand, "Drink it, I've cooled it for you." Yi Luowa happily took a sip, just one sip, before Tong Airui snatched it away with a dark expression. After drinking it in one go, Tong Airui pointed at her nose and shouted, "Remember, you're my maid!" Yi Luowa slapped his hand away, "Tong Airui, you running faster than a rabbit proves you're healed. My days as a maid are over!" [Pampering Wife Chapter] Second Sister: "Tong Fourth, your wife has already beaten Grandpa ten times in a row. If this continues, Grandpa will get sick from anger! Aren't you going to control your wife?" Tong Airui: "If his skills are not as good as others, why insist on playing chess with my wife? That's not something I can control!" Fifth Brother: "Fourth Brother, can't you control my sister-in-law? She's taken eight championships from me!" Tong Airui: "From now on, when your sister-in-law enters a car race, you just don't enter!" Fifth Brother: "The key is, she participates in every race." Tong Airui: "I'll give you ten months to quickly win a championship. After ten months, I can't control her." Fifth Brother: "What's happening?" Tong Airui: "Your sister-in-law is expecting!" [PS: Spoiling text, strong male and female leads, both emotionally and physically pure, one-on-one relationship, continuous pampering. If you like it, please add to your favorites, love you~

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How to shorten a long story effectively?
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2024-10-14 23:18
One way is to focus on the main plot points and eliminate unnecessary details. Cut out any side stories or characters that don't contribute to the core of the story.
How can one shorten a long story?
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2024-11-23 11:06
One way to shorten a long story is to focus on the main plot points. Cut out any unnecessary details, side stories, or overly descriptive passages. For example, if it's a story about a hero's journey to save a princess, just keep the key events like the hero getting the quest, facing the main obstacles, and finally rescuing the princess. Skip things like what the hero ate for breakfast every day or detailed descriptions of every single tree in the forest he passed through.
What are the best techniques to shorten a long story?
1 answer
2024-11-22 12:13
One great technique is to be ruthless with sub - plots. If a long story has multiple sub - plots that are not essential to the main story arc, axe them. Let's say a story is about a young artist trying to make it in the big city, and there's a sub - plot about the artist's neighbor's cat that keeps getting into the artist's studio. Unless that cat somehow plays a crucial role in the artist's journey, it can be removed. Also, look for any parts of the story that are just there for filler and delete them.
It's kind of a long story. Should I shorten it?
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2024-11-30 23:19
No need. Just tell it as it is.
How to effectively shorten a long novel?
1 answer
2024-10-17 09:13
Well, to shorten a long novel, you might want to look at the pacing. Speed up slow sections and condense repetitive elements. And don't be afraid to remove scenes that don't advance the main conflict or character growth.
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