raphtalia x naofumi fanfic

Tate no Yuusha fanfics are so underrated! There are many stories that explore Naofumi's more human side—trauma, disappointment, and his struggle to trust others again. Not only about action and the isekai world, but also emotional relationships, especially with Raphtalia & Filo. There are also alternate universe fanfics that make Naofumi a villain (and surprisingly deep!), or ones that imagine him being summoned to a different world. What makes it exciting: the fanfics can fill in the gaps that weren't explored in the anime. From bromance with Ren to light slice-of-life stories with his party. I have read some shield hero fanfic for some time and this one is great

This is my impressions of your story: Pros: + Lots of descriptions + A father-daughter relationship? + Plot makes me invested to know what would happen next Cons: - The descriptors seem to drag the story on - Sentences can be shortened - First chapter was a bit confusing (I struggle with this as well) - Set up for the bigger picture? (Needs Build-up) This story reminds me a lot of the anime "The Rising Shield Hero" as the relationship between the Nannade and Garrett is similar to Naofumi and Raphtalia. It might have a more serious connotation compared to the latter, but good nonetheless.

Seriously WHAT HAPPENED ??? The first novel while the MC was a bit too passive at least it had a plot and the characters were fleshed out, most of all it wasn't rushed and the interaction of the characters (Motoyasu and Naofumi / MC and Raphtalia) was the high point of the novel, but now this rewrite is like spiting on the original idea; the novel became a ****ty downgrade of an wishfulfillment novel without any good selling point, the personality of the MC is that of an uncharismatic spoiled bastard that kills all the enjoyment of the novel, there're no longer a plot, it feels rushed, there're no longer the interaction of characters that was the major selling point of the novel... all in all, this rewrite is a DISAPPOINTMENT

Pretty incredible for a fanfic, really... *spoiler* only I found Raphtalia's power up forced but 8/10 so far... (I would raise the points to 10/10 but new chapters are missing+++... The fanfic is very entertaining)

A really good fanfiction. A random guy is reincarnated(?) into Kindred from LOL who is then isekai'd as the bow hero from the rising of the shield hero. MC was a dude but now is lamb. MC just informs Naofumi of common shit like how the kingdom is a matriarchy and stuff, and doesn't baby feed him like a certain other novel. It's really unique, I don't give a flying **** if MC isn't building a yuri harem, or if there's no romance in the novel at all. Fuck those guys that spam "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" Like a thousand times. The story is fine, but it could use more MC than Naofumi, for example the MC using their knowledge on the world for their own benefit. I don't care about how canon went down or anything, I am not sure if I want MC to have additional party members besides wolf. If you do add party members, they should be blank slates, like pretty much Firo or Raphtalia were, just a bunch of no-knowledge noobs. I dislike everything about Motoyasu so please torture him or some shit later on if you have the time. I don't particularly like Naofumi as well, but don't fucking help him too much.