human toothless gets hiccup pregnant fanfiction

The story has good premise and the character is good but the story is so jumbled parts of the story are just mashed together making its make absolutely no sense cause at the start hiccup already is a dragon rider then its puts him where he’s not even friends with toothless this story makes no sense

The book is surprisingly good! If anyone’s curious about the story — especially because of its awful synopsis — know that it’s basically a fusion of How to Train Your Dragon and Game of Thrones, with Hiccup and Toothless reincarnated as Aerys’ son and his dragon. The story’s really well done — the plot is clear, it’s well integrated, and the characters are super well portrayed. The only thing keeping it from being perfect is the chaotic posting schedule, with no predictions or proper timeline.

It’s rare to find good Lord of the Rings fanfictions on this site that aren’t translations, even more so one where the protagonist is a dragon. Either way, this is a good fanfiction.

This is a great story I am extremely intruiged by this new side to the story! Great work author I thoroughly enjoy this story I would like to give recommendations to increase viewer count 1: Add and image for book title thing: make it using ai or something, image would be a dragonoid 1/2 human 1/2 dragon, aka human with scales and wings and tail represent 1/2 life as human, 1/2 life as dragon Have berk as background on left hand side, then sea, then fog, then dragon island on right hand side Or have the image split in 2 via a lightning strike or a plasma bolt shot by the female nightfury in clouds Have hiccup be split between human and dragon forms ( have image of toothless sitting down for hiccup dragon form, and for human form have him at the forge), same background as last time 2: I would recommend splitting up chapters into smaller chunks Though i enjoy chapter size, you can split up chapters (without changing it ) Just get to a scene shift and start a new chapter From MY reading perspective most chapters are 35-45 pages long Most chapters from other books are 12-18 pages long This would increase chapter count as when most people look for stories They look for books with many chapters and not so much, few chapter, but chapters are long I would ask that you say in book title ( after adding image ) “hello i know the chapter count looks short but each chapter on the “medium reading size” setting gives about 40 pages per chapter” This book is absolutely fantastic and definitely one of my favourites so far, currently on chapter 2 but feels like i’m already at what would be chapter 10! 😁 🎩 😁 ☕️👌

Story is ok. It could be better if the author let the MC be his own person with his own thoughts and feelings and goals. Instead, hes just a baby sitter for hiccup and astrid and it gets annoying. Hes always following and sticking up for hiccup, for no reason other than plot and it comes off as forced. The author states that theyre friends, but their interactions state otherwise. Not to mention the author decides to have the MC lose his leg….for no reason whatsoever. Does the author want the MC to be hiccup or something? Like at that point why even make an OC. The MC shoulda just been hiccup. (Id just like to know the reasoning) he could have lost an eye, an arm, an ear, a hand….ANYTHING. Yet the author wanted to have him lose a leg and not be able to walk…i mean whatever.