michaela and jared fanfiction

Shameless Author 5 Star Review! This is my first ever novel, so please be patient with me! As of now, I have no intentions of including Romance, but I will give a brief synopsis of the story below! : Jared, a random man taken from Earth is suddenly reincarnated due to the crazy ritual of some Undead Liches! Attempting to resurrect their leader, their ritual is interrupted, instead summoning Jared. But with the ritual going wrong, all who know about it are killed, leaving Jared’s soul to wander until it can the nearest body… an Ant! From here, Jared will go through a multitude of challenges, making friends and enemies along his adventures! Together, Jared will little by little carve his own path to peace and freedom in this dangerous, magical world filled with monsters and humans alike!

[img=update][img=recommend] Jared and Lira's Book is here!!! To the readers, please continue to support this book and this author's journey into becoming a great one. 👍❤️💕🤗

The story is good 👍. I just hope shina will be back with Jared and also don't stop the misunderstandings if you do that the book will lose it's strongest point

Intriguing! Keep up the good work. Pray the traitors be found. Know it must be linked to Jared. Noah and Aria should be safe together with their loved ones. More please 🙏🙏🙏

I'm at chapter 11 and these are my thoughts character design 2.5 l I'm sticking with that for one reason the main character and Jared these character`s are so dumb apes look like advanced civilizations and the other characters have not shown much personality but it feels like it would with some time, now to elaborate on how dumb they are ill pick 2 examples 1-when he unlocks the system and gets monarchies cloak, after like 2 days of ownership HE SELLS IT FOR 100,000, AND THE WORST PART IS THE BUYER IMMEDIATELY AGREES HOW COULD THAT NOT TIP HIM OFF it's WORTH MORE THAN YOUR GETTING ANY WHY WOULD YOU SELL IT 2- in the first chapter there is this guy named Jared he antagonizes the mc for no reason and is not shown hurting others, it seemed forced but he could be slightly fixed by showing him bully other students so it didn't look like a reverse plot armor move world background 3- not much yet but hopefully its good story development 3.5- it's actually pretty good forgetting how dumb the mc is and Jared updates ??? unclear haven't checked Writing design 2- it's fine but suffers from being slightly bland and the mc and Jared. in conclusion, the mc is a dumb baboon in human skin with its young master descendent Jared everything else is fine except they're a bit bland as its the start but it has a lot of potential and i will come back after there are more chapters