asami and akihito fanfiction

This story is heavily inspired by the manga "A loveprize in viewfinder". And while the original story is really good, this author accomplished to make it even more to my taste. The characters of Asami and Akihito match the original to 80 and 95% respectivley. Akihito doesn't run away as much as he does in the original, so a real relationship can be developed. And Asami treats Akihito from the beginning more like he does in the middle of the manga. We skip all the rapey parts. So for me, this author cut out everything I didn't like about the manga and highlighted everything I loved about it. And as a bonus: Fei Long and Tao are also mentioned, and Fei Long plays a big role. So author, thank you for a very good read!

[img=update] surely I need more 😻 I like Asami though who is the main lead 🤔🤔 its Apollo or Asami? Its very new to me the style and this is not like Alpha this and Alpha that 😅 or it is I read too much hahaha!

this is so god damn good and i hope the author has sokka have the ring later in the story and of it crosses over to korra maybe even have asami have it

Reviewing the latest 3 chapters- would suggest to improve grammer i.e she said, scratching her arm. Readability is fine in general. The sentence below though- what is the main subject? “Father,do you remember Akihito Makoto,the drug dealer?”He questioned. Sentence variety is there and passive voice is kept low. All the best ^^

It's a very great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a very interesting plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I love how MC/Akihito is not a ninja, but a noble in Fire Country (even become a Fire Daimyo).. But he still train like a samurai (even as strong as Jonin).. It also tell the intricity life of noble in Fire Country... It's interesting to see how he develop his land to become the most prosper in Fire Country (can you explain how he develop his province).. I love how he saved and recruit Karin mother.. Maybe he can saved others with tragic backstory too (like Haku, Kabuto, etc)... Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍