after divergent fanfic

This is a very good fanfic. Although the motive is unclear at first, the story shapes up into an intriguing divergent from the original. The translations is thoughtful and carries great grammar (so much so that I did not even know it was a translation until chapter 30).

Sebenarnya bagus, tapi aku benci ketika fanfic bukan AU tapi masih dalam tipe canon divergent. Contohnya ya dalam anime aslinya bell itu tokoh utama, tapi mengapa seakan-akan dalam fanfic juga dibuat ia protagonis ini yang bagiku sangat menjengkelkan.

As someone already pointed out, the story is average, but it is incredibly inconsistent.After 16 years, the mc only has two moves under his belt Divergent Fist and Black Flash one is useless to anyone other than Yuji and the other is based on chance meanwhile he can only use the six eyes for a couple of MINUTES after having them for 16 YEARS. But in a couple of days of training, he improved greatly

Similar to another story but divergent and interesting enough on it’s own. Consistent updates and a pretty firm story line that keeps me waiting for more.

it gets better as it goes , proper development of character on MC bit by bit . interaction are nice . some of the earlier chapter is a mess , quality dramatically improved after the canon divergent event . the only downside now is 11d since last update ( writing a good piece of story takes time i know ) .still , i want MORE! NOW!