elements of good fictional short stories

Each stories is captivating. The love, passion and power are the strongest elements of this short novel. A modern story of rich family that had their own love trials before it ended into a good companionship.

To sum it up: "This was a really exciting experience, such a shame is also too short" - that's what she said. You see, this here was actually a great novel, the elements of a time period that almost no author of light novels seems to use, the originality of the story telling without abusing tropes, and the sweet madness that isn't exaggerated as in the generic fictional works, this was a good reading. But you could have worked the naming, really.

The story is excellent, especially the way it blends real history with fictional elements, which is excellent. The character designs are excellent, believable, and don't feel contrived. So far, the story development has been good.

Its a nice story... the plot is good though sometimes could seems so surreal and fictional.. however the plot is good in a sense that the author does not focus fully on the ML only.. he/she also has lots of short stories to the people around making other characters alive rather thatn fully supposting the ML only which could be boring as most books are...

Not a bad story, just a pity that there are few open chapters. The characters are not cardboard, but fictional, their stories are fictional, and the situations are made up. And that makes them really real.