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Not much phased Bai Mei Xing. After graduating with a Master's degree in Forensic Anthropology at the age of 16, she became the youngest professor of Anthropology in the history of A University and moonlighted as a consultant for the local and national police forces. All in all, she was a highly intelligent girl with her entire future in front of her. That was until she was abducted by aliens one night while she was sipping hot chocolate by her favorite lake. Years of torture later and she was able to team up with another prisoner and take over the spaceship and enact a little revenge on the crew that held her captive. Facing a completely limitless future, Bai Mei Xing decided to forge a new path for herself. But she would live her life on her terms, even if she was facing a 7-foot warrior species that specialized in killing. Nothing would stand in her way. After all, Star's ships were meant to fly. Other Novels: Rebirth In the Apocalypse: Third Time's A Charm (Completed) Fight, Flight, or Freeze: The Healer's Story (Completed) Part Of Your World (Completed) Dancing with Monsters (Completed) As Silent As A Mouse (Completed) Be Careful What You Wish For: A Zombie Apocalypse Novel (Completed) The Witch In The Woods: The Transmigration of Hazel-Anne Davis (Ongoing) Seraphina's Revenge (Ongoing) Discord: Sakura#6289 Discord Channel: https://discord.gg/CapanRmy Instagram: @devil_besideyou666

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ghost_kuro
2022-08-23

writing quality 1 star, story development 1 star, character design 1 star, stability of update 4 star, world background 3 star, i dont know why this story seems to make me dull. i cant really feel any excitement or any feeling reading this chapter. i only feel ANNOYED every time the MC lie to other people. so strong and op yet the only word that comes from the MC's mouth is a lie. there is only two words that i can use to describe the MC: COWARD & HYPOCRITE. to justify my reason because MC is a living liar that lies to everyone he meets. MC is scared of everything. MC always stated that he does not like to take the first initiative to cause trouble for someone who did not wrong him. But then because of his fear of danzo he decided to sacrifice the whole uchiha clan. why i rate so low because, in terms of writing quality its too much useless repetitive description. what I'm trying to say is : person B : the apple is a fruit. the apple has a shape. the apple two colors .the apple is either red or green. apple is only one of many fruits but still red apple is more preferable.Red apple are generally more sweet and slightly more heavier in terms of weight. person A : shocked by the realization of red apple is more preferable. persob B : (continues to repeat) after thinking about it green apple and red apple are also in high demand. To tell you the truth the fruit we need is an apple. We need to find out the shape of the apple. we need to investigate the difference between two colour of the apple. We also need to find more red apple because it is more preferable. because red apple is more sweet and heavier than green apple. this this the writing quality of this fanfic. very repetitive. as for character Design is very bland and Boring. Normally when we read about MC getting new powers as a reader we will be excited to see the MC using the powers or train his best in it. BUT in this fanfic i am already numb when i see the mc get a new power . for example. MC got paper jutsu on early chapter then suddenly after a few more chapters he still get the same paper jutsu from reading mind. YET, the MC acted shocked as if he got the jutsu for the first time. many jutsu are being recycle as if the MC did not realize it. there is no growth for MC(immature> mature attitude/mindset), because he always runs away and kept a low profile.very cowardly and boring to read.

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Tell me the 'apple star children's story'.
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2024-11-17 15:37
Since I'm not familiar with the 'apple star children's story', I can only make some assumptions. It could be that in a small village, there are some children. One day, they see an apple tree with apples that have a strange star - like mark on them. As they pick and eat the apples, they gain special powers and go on a journey to save their village from some kind of danger.
What are the main characters in the 'apple star children's story'?
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2024-11-17 11:25
Not having read the 'apple star children's story', I can only guess. I think the main characters would be the children, of course. There might be a mysterious figure who guards the apple star. It could be a wizard or a magical being. And there may be some antagonist characters, like a greedy thief who wants to steal the power of the apple star from the children.
What is the story of 'The Apple Garden' children's book?
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2024-10-08 23:17
The story of 'The Apple Garden' is a delightful one. It centers around children who stumble upon this special place, where they make friends, face challenges, and learn valuable lessons along the way.
The Story of Christmas, Apple and Star
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2024-11-11 01:43
The Christmas story is often associated with giving and sharing. An apple can be related to Christmas in the sense that it can be a part of the festive treats. And the star is a very important symbol in Christmas, representing the Star of Bethlehem that guided the Wise Men to Jesus. Maybe in a story, a child on Christmas eve found an apple under a tree with a star - shaped ornament hanging above it, and it became a special moment of the Christmas celebration for the child.
Children's Apple Scent Song
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2026-01-18 11:46
The lyrics of the children's version of "Apple Scent" were as follows: Red-beaked geese fly back, reeds swaying in the wind Across the river, Savourethai Are you here today? That year I came to water my horse Your white yurt I've seen you play the winter bra I've heard you sing A simple meeting An ordinary night I was at that time Silly waiting until dawn The moon bears witness The feathers on your felt hat Kissing the night breeze, drifting Ah, floating to my heart From Six Star Street The sound of the Bayan? Alexandre's Bakery Is Lieba out of the oven? Nanyuan braised fragrance is a story on the tip of the tongue You let the wandering child Go home in your dreams In the kaleidoscope of childhood There are wild pigeons flying This reminds me of my second brother And his beloved slingshot fork Lake blue courtyard wall The courtyard in my life My mother is there to give me love Tell me never to forget There's a place in my heart Engraved your name prairie river valley The scent of rose flowers All my songs Leaving you when I was a child When the flowers bloom Now the past far blur But I can't forget the apple fragrance Now the past far blur But I can't forget the apple fragrance The lyrics were written by Lang Ge, and the composition was Lang Ge, which was recorded in the album Apple Fragrance (Children's Voice Version). "Rose Fragrance Shadow: The Story of Sweetheart's Growth" was equally exciting. Everyone was welcome to click and read it!
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