very long poems that tell a story

I really liked this. I loved the connection between Aries and her sister. The moment her sister came into the tower, you could TELL that they had been together for as long as they could remember. The way the poems are written makes it as if Aries was the one writing them, which makes them all the better for development in the story.

Great but a little less long blocks of text like poems and stuff would be good.

From writing short poems and story u came a long way charuu 😭💗 from the very first I was fond of ur writing, seeing u publishing ur own story here made my day. hope u and ur work get all the love it deserves🫶🏾

This is a really cool poem. It took me a long time to understand what each line meant because I'm not very familiar with this style. My favourite line from the poems is this one: "I was disused and fell in despair to the ground. Clattering in dejection. Unawares in grief, I slid into your embrace." I like how there is a mix of short sentences and long sentences and even just single words. Poems can be really different from stories as you can be a lot more expressive and be creative with sentence structure.

A superb collection of very fine gem of the poems from equally superb writers and poets. A must read. A book that should be in everyone's library to give a breath of fresh air when you are tired, reading long novels. XD