boy atomic wedgie story

I hate MC. No brain, no wisdom, no imagination. This is not story, where power Atomic Eve realised with full speed. This is poor story where gray boy take power and have no brain use it right. Fighting with Ugly-Hulk, when he can do adamantium? If you even read 12 steps to immortality (or invincible), you know about i talking. Atomic is 0.1% of this MC. Don't recommend fic. Author can't create something well even from good ingredients 😕

I really love the concept of atomic samurai in one piece I belive mihawk is stronger than atomic samurai though its mostly bc of haki And btw is this translation?

To be perfectly honest with you, I thought this was a Cid-Kagenouh-type-fic cuz [I Am Atomic] is basically his famous like but sikce this is actually Atomic Samurai, it's a 5/5 for me now

Well, kind of interesting history. Keep It up the good work. But If you want some atomic Power, It can be something like atomic Roar, where It can produce really high vibrations with high radiation

It needs a rewrite but the premise is good boy is made into vampire wants to do good joins **** titans that's all well and good but it needs more thinking and seemed rushed honestly I'd kind of make the mc a true born vampire of a human woman like blade with all the strengths of a vampire with none of the weaknesses except maybe magic and complete atomic destruction