batman slaps nightwing fanfiction

So far, this story has shown to be a great pastime for me, not a perfect story by any means, it's pacing is a bit too fast and the grammar and dialogue do lack a little, not to mention that the MCU part of the story is just a copy paste of the original movies with batman and the bat family added in to minimize collateral damage in their large scale fights and add some extra dialogue and more interactions with original characters which isn't all that bad to be honest, because I've seen worse, but the idea of this universe's batman is very great and the batman origins, the green goblin, the red room and Nightwing sagas were all great in their own ways, it helps with world building and introducing new characters to the fold. Overall a great story. I give it four stars.👍

I be honest, it's a good story with a good writing quality, the problem I have is that the author has no f idea about how useful some templates are, for example he choose Aragorn over NIGHTWING the NIGHTWING who lived his whole life in Gotham a place that is worse then Hell's kitchen and the person trained by BATMAN the guy who beat the hell out of darkseid in a one vs one. He didn't choose the Hercule template from Dragonball that only cost 2 points, I mean it makes sense that a person who can drag three busses behind him and destroy metal is only worth 2 points, I mean he is one of the weakest people in his universe of multiverse busters.

I love this novel, I will probably cry if it is dropped. I like how you made a character with little significance (to me at least) become a hero who rallies allies and enemies alike. I also like how instead of just giving him powers he invents serums to get them. I like the direction it is going, the only thing I would change is he should take more effort in the company and have more of a personal life, I always hated how Batman was never Bruce Wayne, sure Batman is badass when he is fighting bad guys, but outside of fighting crime he is just a old guy with PTSD in a basement with a bunch of kids in tights.🚓 call the police 🚓 I also dislike how Nightwing leaves a trails of broken hearts in his wake (Starfire, Zatanna, Batgirl, etc), Harry should have a harem. I would usually suggest a normal pairing but with Nightwing's personality and your writing skills he should have a harem.