bella and jasper fanfic

This was really funny. Jasper was so mean that it had me cracking up the entire story. I hope you add more. I never realized how much Alice being his mate must have changed Jasper

Honestly this is so refreshing. You’re doing an amazing job. Jasper is such a fun loving character and im glad there is no system bulshit, it feels real. Hopefully you can expand on jasper’s own life a little. Just keep it going.😄😊😊😊

while it is a good idea, the written Novel is trash! First of all, you don't know shit about the stories and have no info at all and write what you want,like the Mc met the hollow, had Sex with her and thousand of years Later you meet the Mikealsons( the hollow of the Originals series was born around 1500 and thousand of years Later you meet the Mikealsons when they where still Humans even tho the were Turned around the year 1000 ) . then again, he met Jasper in the year 1776 even tho jasper was born in 1844. and when he met jasper again in the 21 century, jasper didn't even recognize him! **( I hope there aren't many Spelling mistakes because I won't prove read it )

I read up to chapter 51 and honestly it’s quite surprising how Alice is the love interest considering she’s got no chemistry with the main character compared to Bella of all people and there’s also the situation Alice and Jasper have that makes it seem as if the story is going to have a love triangle. Also the main character seems to switch up personalities at random since he can go from being calm to arrogant out of nowhere lol (There’s a lot of simp shit with Alice too even though the author said it was only for ONE chapter it keeps happening)