sex fantasy short story

Honestly, this is pure smut. The first 90 chapters were acceptable because you knew it was about sex and only sex. The problem comes after that: the author tried to create a story. The sex scenes started to get really weak, and the worst part comes from the "story." It completely changes the flow and becomes very disconnected from those initial 90 chapters. In the end, for smut, it ends up being short and weak, and for a story, it falls short because of the sudden change in story. To give you an idea, it went from 5-6 chapters of pure smut to just 1 chapter and a half.

I loved the story like, but too much on sex, sex,and sex. How the story ended was good too. Well I guess that's why is an ***** read. I also love it because its short and straight forward. The skills of description is top notched. Just for joke ooh, Author loves snu snu things too much. Good work.

This story started off pretty promising with interesting characters. unfortunately this story suffers really hard from having a million female characters to balance. they all eventually become a one dimensional horny character that thinks almost of nothing else other than sex and semen. All the "conflict" he had is very short lived and mc characters has a serious wuxia syndrome being really overpowered. None if his powers does not feel earned and its just a really overindulgence male sex fantasy. its a real shame it turned out like this.

Cabt deby that this novel has the best sex scene in fantasy. It was clear writing and it was stimulating and fun to read. Even the story itself is good

This story is amazing and best part is the interest is maintained even as it goes on , this book is mixture of most of sex,action,full of fantasy and cliff hangers.