"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
This fanfiction is good if you compare it with other fanfiction in this website. But compare to the other fanfiction, this fanfic is just subpar. The mc character is good but the writing skill of the author is not. Training montage of the mc is so bland. The interaction between mc and other character is nothing but state-up fact. I recommend Game of Shadow from Adrian King1, Thread plague from waki paki or Becoming Hokage 101 from Ichika01 if the author want to improve his/her writing skill.