adding in his two cents fanfic

My two cents on this fanfic is that, at the beginning, the main character might come off as incredibly dumb or annoying. However, as the story progresses and the main character begins to gain his bearings, you will start to see growth as he makes plans for the Uchiha clan and hones his fighting skills.

One dollar and eighty-seven cents. That was all. And sixty cents of it was in pennies. Pennies saved one and two at a time by bulldozing the grocer and the vegetable man and the butcher until one’s cheeks burned with the silent imputation of parsimony that such close dealing implied. One dollar and eighty-seven cents. And the next day would be Christmas...

just my two cents, if you want to write a one piece fanfic, explore the unknown fruits that can be overpowered by creativity and user themselves or simply discard devil fruits and focus on haki, science and physical developments. using crossover powers like mana, chakra and qi are cringe too.

Just my two cents here but it was a pretty decent story. That lasted until he met a female human, where he proceeded to throw away the last 19 chapters, his backstory, his brain and his b*lls all so he could bend over backwards for this girl as if he's a 12y/o who just got introduced to p*rn.

One of the nicest fanfic based on sheldon. Not changing his core character but adding more to it. Episode by episode escalation and people touch is good. Solid work.