tips for a good short story

Good Morning, Mister Dragon!

Framed by her so-called best friend and half-sister, Su Qianxun stumbled upon a strange man when she was making her escape. A strange man so handsome it looked as if his face was carved by the Gods, but with a heart as cold as stone. A wild and fiery night ensued, and ever since then, they embarked on a journey filled with passion, lust, conspiracy and treachery.

Han Jiangxue · Urban

The Good-for-Nothing Seventh Miss

She is one of the best thieves that the world has seen in the 24th century. However, not even in her wildest dreams had she imagine that she'd be reincarnated as a good-for-nothing orphaned Seventh Miss of the Vermilion Bird Family. She finds herself stuck in a family that mistreats her, as well as an unfamiliar place with no support system. In a world of magic, she finds that the strength and talent within her would not only shock the world but also put every prodigy in that world to shame. As she learns to control her power, she vows to take revenge on those who had wronged her and to eventually rule the world. Equipped with only her new memories, quick wit and thieving skills, follow her as she embarks on a journey where she'd navigate mean relatives, magical beasts, rulership, and maybe even… love?

North Night · Fantasy

Rebirth to a Military Marriage: Good Morning Chief

Qiao Nan: Crap! I am your biological daughter, yet I am treated as if I was picked up from the streets. In fact, you treat me worse than that! Mother Qiao: Qiao Nan, you are not as pretty or smart as your elder sister. You are not as blessed as her. You have no right to study, marry, or to have your happiness! Qiao Nan: Why am I not allowed to study, marry, or to seek my happiness? I will find a man right now and marry him! Qiao Nan is dumbstruck upon discovering that the man right beside her is a powerful figure in the quad—the person who has the most promising prospects to be the future Chief. Qiao Nan stares at the well-built man in front of her. He has firm abs and cold, chilling eyes. She swallows the lump in her throat as she says her greetings, "Good Morning, Chief!"

Scarlet Phoenix · Urban

Good Evening, Mr President!

In the eyes of Chi Zuxu, Chi Yi is a typical delinquent with the three big ‘NOs’— no morals, no virtues, no principles. To her, though, he is a classic baddie who is heartless, soulless, and inhuman. After the girl breaks and climbs through his glass window on the second story, she peeps at him with an innocent demeanor. “Chi Zuxu, lend me the other half of your bed!” she wolf-whistles at him blatantly. The man admonishes with a scowl, “Chi Yi, aren’t you shameless!” Inside the cinema, as Chi Yi’s little hands restlessly grope the man’s body without chagrin, she tells him smilingly, “Chi Zuxu, I want to do bad things with you!” Holding a look of woeful disgrace, he knocks her head. “Chi Yi, aren’t you embarrassed!” It is a lovely love story between a barefaced and a reticent. But, Mr Reticient, please don’t cry when Miss Barefaced finally slips away.

Lady Rong · Urban

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Lullabybao

2020-08-16

I really like your writing style. Would it be okay if i take some tips? ♥️. Oberall, Well made story but too short. It's like having a bite of cotton candy. It just melts too fast but yet still tastes so good.

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ItsHashi

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Honest review here, i read the story, and i gotta give some tips and advice. 1. The paragraphs are too long. 2. The story is too fast-paced at times. 3. The sentences are too long, no dots to display a pause. 4. Chapters are too short. Overall the story is good, but i would recommend the author to take these elements into consideration.

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CathCath92

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This story encourage the readers to continue read and imagine that the story did in a real life so it is become interesting and exciting although there are some part that is not suitable for the young readers. In short it is a nice story for us to get some tips and a lesson to be pick up to learn a lot.

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Nico_Merry

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I've been reading up the story every episode and waiting for the tips up date every day, but for the tips sometimes up date sometimes, sometimes to wait a week for the story.

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(No spoilers just some tips for readers) it is not a short story and it also is finished so you might wanna go back and read some of the comments that people have good gas on what Pokémon are named in the series for some reason. A good amount of the Pokémon are not called what they’re normally called. That’s all I have to say.

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I'm signing in by devouring the starry sky

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The Dragon Clan started to become a behind-the-scenes big shot from cultivating Lu Mingfei.

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Morbid spoiling

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Traveler from the Heavens: Starting from becoming a second generation zombie

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