zoroark hurt fanfiction

Very enjoyable read so far with solid writing quality also Lucario is my favorite pokemon and I hope Zoroark is added to the team

Enjoying it so far. Hope ya make the mc OP. I wish he was a shiny lol. Purple zoroark looks dope. What would be a cool idea is if ya gave him a mega evolution. I know zoroark doesn’t have one in base game but in Pokémon Insurgence (it’s a fan made game) they gave zoroark a dope looking mega form. Wonder how that would work? Would he need to form a close enough bond with a human or would he be able to mega evolve himself?? Also if he catches a Pokémon that can mega evolve. Would it not work since he isn’t human? Just some ideas assuming your gunna have mega evolutions in the story lol.

Okay, the idea behind this is amazing. But you shouldn't just correct the translation, you should also rewrite some things. Especially the connections to God Valley, because they really hurt the fanfiction in general.

you have some potential. but you need to read more you make rookie mistakes and commit so many clichés it physically hurt to read your work. read 100 of the top harry potter fanfiction. plus the books again the attempt this again

I like the story, it isn’t just nsfw slop with pokemon, it has a story and actually peak inside of it, however i recommend you skip the hisui arc, it’s way to long, over a hundred chapters, actually don’t skip it, read until he finds zoroark and ‘tames’ it, then skip to the end of the arc and read it from their