other names for america in fiction

Set in nineteenth-century America, Red is the last living survivor of a Native American tribe that was slaughtered by white men. On a long journey in search of revenge, he travels with Ieroh Itou, a samurai who ran away to America after being defeated in the Seinan civil war, and Angie, a mysterious prostitute. The bonds of friendship between the three are touching. Although it is all fiction, the story seems very real as it is based on actual battles between US troops, Apaches and other tribes.

Nice story, though you are in a (very) serious need for an Editor. I liked the names. But right now the novel feels to much like other fiction-fantasy novels...I am looking forward to the other chapters. Keep it up and Keep it going!!

It’s a great idea, just a translation issue for me. When a story is set in America it should have the American gang names for example or more American speech. In the uk we don’t say things like ‘call me daddy’ or use ridiculous sounding gang names, well they are still weird names but nothing like ‘heavenly death defying immortal dragon’. It sounds like a cultivation novel when it shouldn’t.

Till now what I have read is awesome, it's one of the best I have read so far just that the author is a Chinese is showing too much like people bowing in gratitude in america, who does that there and there are many other points too as the mc has lived in america for more than 10 years more essence of America should be there....

To be honest this novel is good up to a certain point . The thing i don't like is the translator always picking and choosing what to change in the novel for example country names ( america changed to UAE WTF!) and organisation names like the FBI for example and giving us some random name as a replacement. Back to the novel i only like reading when his back in the modern world i find that more interesting.