male horse that's the subject of a novel

It is a bit strange, give girls a horse tail and horse ears and treat them like horses. Then let those girls behave like a horse, and you have a story. It is not flattering to be compared with a horse, but it is a male thing, I suppose.

it's just a horse why are you attaching needless sentiments to a horse? in that secret realm if I was Selena I would've disagreed with the stupid MC why should i slow my pace for a stupid horse when my life is at stake? if the MC was in Selena's posting i can bet my life that he would've persuaded Selena to leave the horse behind, typical author hypocrisy ofc I'm sure if I continue reading the author will end up making his decision to slow their pace down for the horse benefit him Good novel fr the 5 stars isn't cap But this particular chapter just ticks me off so much that I even contemplated dropping the novel but the good parts of the novel made me continue

authors must continue this black horse novel

🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎🐎 HORSE I SEE HORSE HORRRRRSSEEEEEEEE

I appreciate that you had the courage to start a fanfic about Uma Musume: Pretty Derby, but unfortunately, it seems you didn’t want to continue it. I gave a low rating mainly because you removed the core concept of the series—having only horse-girls. If you're unsure why that matters, I recommend checking out the novel "I Want to Be a Fluffy, Airheaded Gray Umamusume and Trick My Trainer!" It captures the spirit of the series really well. Most people who enjoy this kind of anime have one thing in common: we care about and respect the lore behind the characters. For example, you can tell whether a horse-girl was originally a male or female horse in real life just by which side they wear their hair accessory on. Gold Ship, who was a male horse, wears hers on the right side of her head in the anime. McQueen, who was female, wears it on the left. And have you ever wondered why Gold Ship is always so focused on McQueen? That’s because, in real life, McQueen was Gold Ship’s grandmother. So, if you or anyone else reading this ever wants to write a novel based on this series, please don’t ruin it by focusing only on NSFW content. And don’t worry if you want to experiment—if you really want to try adding a horse-boy, you could make him an anomaly in the world, facing bullying or societal rejection, for example. That could be a powerful story if done right. Good luck to anyone who accepts the challenge—and if you ever start something like that, please let me know. I promise I’ll give it my full support. :)