alice phone sex jasper fanfic

This was really funny. Jasper was so mean that it had me cracking up the entire story. I hope you add more. I never realized how much Alice being his mate must have changed Jasper

Great story, liked the design of the characters i will say that the relationship between alice and jasper seems kinda forced but overall good job. Was wondering if you were going to continue it or are you dropping?

while it is a good idea, the written Novel is trash! First of all, you don't know shit about the stories and have no info at all and write what you want,like the Mc met the hollow, had Sex with her and thousand of years Later you meet the Mikealsons( the hollow of the Originals series was born around 1500 and thousand of years Later you meet the Mikealsons when they where still Humans even tho the were Turned around the year 1000 ) . then again, he met Jasper in the year 1776 even tho jasper was born in 1844. and when he met jasper again in the 21 century, jasper didn't even recognize him! **( I hope there aren't many Spelling mistakes because I won't prove read it )

It is a good story and I like the direction it is going, I never liked Edward anyway. In my opinion you should let Jasper die in a fight and have him tell Adrian to transfer the b9nd before he dies so Alice wont be hurt. And update the story more when possible.