milo murphy's law zack x melissa fanfic

Hahaha, Murphy's law works overtime but has a lot of humor. I honestly really like the author and all of their stories. Have a good day anyone who's reading this.

In its simplest form, Murphy's Law states: If anything can go wrong, it will. However, as with many successful business theories, the original law has been extended over time to cover specialist areas, several of which are given below: Project Planning: If anything can go wrong, it will.

Hello Author-San I have come back with a fervor to make Ren X Melissa happen. First because there is not a lot of character building for the original book people, other than Amanda, you can easily add back story to Melissa. You could probably make Melissa a very light sadodere and say that in the original book she was like that to Kevin. Then you could probably change it to Ren then talk about how she fell for Ren and was hiding it through her insults. It is also slightly there because when Ren was talking to Melissa the reader could sense some jealousy by Amanda (not sure if you did it intentionally) but it could be a very good set up. Second it would be interesting for the plot, as everybody would be expecting Ren X Amanda but you could mix it up and make it Ren X Melissa. I am pretty sure that most of the readers of the novel prefer Melissa over Amanda. Finally, Ren should be with Melissa because Melissa needs some more screen time and in chapter 338 she is very sussy. Btw I am a Melissa supremacist.

It's not bad, but it's a little unrealistic, of course reading a fanfic it is pretty decent, but the attitudes of the characters, and the reactions if a little off. I just think that Zack feels off in chapter 6, (or chapter 3 the final part). In that chapter Zack agrees to a bet so the mc can get him to join forces and stop the bullying. Zack agreeing when getting so out played is a little unrealistic and I think that Zack would have just ignored "Daniel" when he offered to made the bet. I think Zack would have disagreed to the bet or just not upheld it. I think he would have stormed off or continued to attack "Daniel". But hey maybe like most fanfics this isn't going off of the actual story attitude of characters and the made up fanfic version of the story. I'm not saying it's a bad story, I'm just saying it's to unrealistic for me to read.

Despite it's formidable potential, this book fails miserably in keeping it all together. The entire plot can be defined as Murphy's Law at every turn. Whatever can go wrong, will go wrong and at the worst possible moments, throughout the story. The amount of logical fallacies are through the roof.