ash trained by lance fanfiction

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 👍😍😍 This is a unique fanfiction.. Usually pokemon fanfic is in Ash age (either MC join Ash in his journey or not), but not this story.. Ash not even born in this story.. This story also have quite detail about his system and pokemon world (that plus point for me).. Just give MC a partner/friends in his journey, it will make this story more great.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author sama 😁😁👍👍👍

the one who summoned mc is lance the wizard god. Lance is also a transmigrator from Earth but have different timeliness with Mc's and more futuristic. The game made by lance to find someone who is skilled and have deep understanding of the game. And lance choose mc. To accompany mc there are 2 incarnation of lance/Fernan. First is Wayne and second is Lori, the younger sister of Kate. Lance summon mc to stop Fernan (the continent /world) from destroy Fernan/itself (well it must be confusing) -the problem of this novel start when lance fused himself with Fernan (world/plane) to used magic of creation to create another plane/realm. Bit by bit, Fernan developed conscious and awareness itself because of lance.while not knowing it, lance became the protector god of Fernan. All of his friends(companion) decide to leave Fernan and head to higher universe leaving lance alone to protect Fernan universe. Later there was an invasion by aliens that came to conquer Fernan. Lance with night king and other god succesfully kicked out the alien invaders. But before leaving, the alien throw an evil seed to Fernan's will or conscious and corrupt it. Because of the seed, Fernan realize there is a higher universe with more formidable power. So it want to leave it's cage as plane / world and head to higher universe but the consequence of doing so is so terrible and destroy the whole universe. So lance want to stop it, but because lance has fused with Fernan, he can't touch Fernan. Nearing it's end, a friend's of lance came back to see Fernan. Then Fernan ask for help to his friend. With an item from higher plane they reverse time of the universe. While they want it to reverse to first age, Fernan interrupt the process of reversing time, and they didn't reach the first age,only reach second age. But in second age, the will of Fernan has been corrupted by evil seed. Because of the interruption there is an awkward situation birth by it. There is 2 lance in this time line. So they cooperated, one lance stay at this universe and other lance go to higher universe for item that can remove the evil seed corruption.

Review till CHP 37. It's Meh... Pretty much follows the anime route with a bit of backstory added. Ash is shown to be much smarter than in anime and comes up with new moves and strategy. Everyone else is shown to be INCREDIBLY DUMB! So the story basically just revolves around Ash, emphasizing a million times how awesome he is, Misty and Brock keep praising/hyping him 24x7, everyone else is in awe of Ash! Each and every gym leader is incredibly weak. A few months of training his mons and Ash is much stronger than the likes of Lance and Aghata! Some one as incredible as Giovanni is shown to be completely dumb with zero ability to think! Here's a series of move exchanges to show you how dumb someone like Lance is made to look! He was attacked by a steelix (who was at a higher level than his mons). And these are the types of moves he used against steelix - Dragon, Dragon, Rock, Electric and Dragon again! (this was despite him using Charizard to fight)! Everyone else except Ash is so dumb that no one ever thought of putting a healer in their team! Everyone except Ash is so dumb that they can't co-ordinate their own pokemons with one another! Ash acquires another identity (where he disguises using a mask). Now this was a good idea, but what happens if someone asks the Masked Ash who he really was? Ash will just drop his mask, show his true identity to them, and ask them to keep it a secret! At least a few thousand common people know his SECRET identity 🤣🤣🤣 Oh, Kanto army is getting beat? Elite 4 and a champion level trainer can't win the war? No worries, call a 10 year old kid with only a few months of trainer experience, he'll win the war single handedly. Oh, Ash is in a pinch? Walla! His mon evolved due to their bond! Anyways, this review has gone pretty long. Overall very bad story and story writing.

Other than the gayish lance/spear whatever was that the fic is good